HEYYY
Yep it's as you hear, i have seen a thousand, so as a apology and thx i'll write it again and write it better.
I have grown like a ton writing this shit, and it highlighted so many problems that now i can avoid with my org noveld.
The main issue i have seen is the pacing and direction of the story. (too many things going no clear direction, too much character dumping? with rei and other stuff not to mention typos and spelling that i miss.
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Read lot of book both educational and great novel lets see where we can go
As always thx to all those who support your views, and adding it library makes my day special thx mamedh
The names remains same.
MHA & Monster hunter