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Chapter 319 - Code yellow 2

She gestured to Sophie first. "Reign, your fire discipline was excellent. Controlled bursts, target prioritization, ammunition conservation. However, your positioning put you in unnecessary danger twice. In real combat, unnecessary risks compound until they become fatal mistakes."

Sophie nodded, absorbing the criticism.

"Davids," Beaumont turned to Lyra, "solid marksmanship under pressure, but you need to communicate more with your team. Combat is a conversation—silence gets people killed."

Lyra's enthusiastic nod showed she was taking notes mentally.

"Pithon," Beaumont's gaze found Kelvin, "excellent technical analysis and target identification. Your scanner work provided crucial tactical advantages. But you tunnel-vision when you're interfacing with technology. In real combat, that's a good way to miss the threat that kills you."

Kelvin grimaced, clearly recognizing the validity of the criticism.

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