Kicks111 said: "While the story has an interesting premise, the writing has some serious flaws. First off, the main character is supposedly autistic, but acts completely normal, which isn't a huge problem, but it bring up the question of why mention it several times. the main problem is the writing style, it is incredible juvenile? a lot of slang terms are used with all characters. this brings down the writing quality along with some questionable content with an 20+ adult hitting on an 13-14 year old."
First of all; I'd like to know these "flaws", are there some typos or something?
Second; Yes, Nick has autism, but he acts normal due to growing up, Nick is actually based off myself, other then his name, and I act normal, to some degree, so, Nick does too. It's like that for all "alternate versions" of Nick in my other stories. Also, I've read some other fanfictions with autistic characters, and I'm pretty sure those are just stereotypes about autistic people.
Thirdly; It's Mt. Lady, of course she's going to hit on a 13-14 year old.
Fourth; I'm new at doing this whole writing thing, I only started sometime last month. So cut me some slack here, dude.
But, you do have some good points here, and I understand where you're coming from.